Friday, July 9, 2010

Autobiography Poem


My Name is Nader,
And I am a Saudi,

I am very help full when you need me,
If you have any problem fell free to tell me,

just Knock the door,
just Knock the door,

but do not Harm my feeling,
because I melt like sugar,
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4 comments:

  1. AventJuly 9, 2010 at 8:54 PM

    ohhhh... i like the "just knock the door" part.. so if i get hungry in the middle of the night then come to your room, you will give me food there. nice! i'll try. hope u wont kick me instead. lol

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  2. KimberlyJuly 10, 2010 at 3:01 PM

    If my air conditioner breaks, can I come knock on your door and you will help me? Haha.

    Cool poem. I like the simile you used and how the image matched. It really helps me to get to know you better, which is the point of writing a poem like this.

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  3. CarolinaJuly 11, 2010 at 2:44 PM

    I absolutely loved the simile of sugar, very sweet and very evocative :)

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  4. Wanitcha FAJuly 12, 2010 at 2:26 PM

    Sugar boy!

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